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nigelswift Nov 20, 2003 15:06:57
Replying to Moth

Moth, you're welcome to condense and edit to your heart's content. It's just that I'm incapable of making it snappy myself. I even talk that way, don'tyaknow.
Anyway, since I'm convinced there are "a host of phantom listeners....listening in the quiet of the moonlight" monitoring these threads in their queer quangoid fashion I reckon them as needs to has already read it so I'm perfectly content!!

S Steve Gray
Steve Gray Nov 21, 2003 01:59:36
Replying to nigelswift

I can't decide whether you're paranoid or conceited, Nigel.

Anyway, I agree with ES's comments; you need an attention-grabbing headline and first paragraph, otherwise "click", they're gone. I await Moth's re-draft with eagerness.

BTW, who's actually going to put the site together? Are there any volunteers? I'll do it if pressed, but I've got such a lot on at the moment that I'd be struggling, so I'll be glad if someone else steps forward.