"It's not the snappy webby one-page format that the pros might recommend but I think the issue has to be put down in a way that will tax Big Brother viewers else the subject won't be done justice."

With care, we can do both if you want, nigel. I've only scan read it (no time here at the mo!) but it looks to be great stuff. But it really does need breaking up etc - we can use more than one webpage if necessary.

You know me well enough to know I wouldn't bullshit you, but the only people that would read it are people who will already sign the petition etc given much less info, and a lot of those people will know it already. Others will just see all the text and (misguidedly!) not bother.

By all means it's up to you, but if you want, I can have a look at it? This evening maybe? We can keep most or even all of the detail, to 'do it justice' but target different levels of information to different people - letting them have as much detail as they want/need.

I can (also?) produce a version that'll at least continue Rhiannon's proofreading & punctuation checking!!!

love

Moth