Looks good, if a bit grueling. I'd have thought Barclodiad-y-Gawres was a bit too time consuming for Ocifant, given that it's a bit of a walk, plus not the type of place you want to rush.
Still, I'm ashamed to say there a quite a few on the list I have yet to visit. Maybe I'll have a go at some of it later in the year.
Might your route benefit from a summer length day FW? I wouldn't fancy trying it in December.
K x