Nice one! All sounds good to me (tho I don't often get it right!!!)
To my shame, I've really only consciously started trying to use the light properly fairly recently....
I think 2 things have helped me realise that that was what was wrong with a lot of my shots.
One is using digital - being able to view the pic immediately. And the other is Jane & her paintings!
All those wasted films!!! ;^)
love
Moth