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tuesday wrote:
i hope not
that's truly terrible
rhyming couplets do not poetry make dude
and no cause is served by bad aesthetics
sorry..
M'be, m'be not. Someone felt sufficiently moved/outraged to put pen to paper - for that they have my respect. The rest is here at http://www.themodernantiquarian.com/forum/?thread=23046&message=533164


I especially like the bit that reads -

When we're encased in cans of steel
both hands attached to steering wheel
and eyes fixed on the road ahead -
we may as well be effing Dead
this stretch of road - built over bones
is one of many thousand clones

Could also apply to Stonehenge, Avebury the Rotherwas Serpent, or a hundred other roads cutting through a thousand other bones...

well i must confess i was slightly outraged at your verse it's true!

look man, i know that's not as important as what is happening at Tara and I'm not bashing your sentiments - deeply felt I'm sure - but there's no excuse for fifth form level doggrel - it just reduces the argument - it's a quality control issue I'm afraid

well i must confess i was slightly outraged at your verse it's true!

look man, i know that's not as important as what is happening at Tara and I'm not bashing your sentiments - deeply felt I'm sure - but there's no excuse for fifth form level doggrel - it just reduces the argument - it's a quality control issue I'm afraid